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Take me to wonderland
A crazy world
Much better than this one
Where insanity is a must
And nothing is dull

Take me there
To meet the Rabbit
And the Mad Hatter
The Mouse, the Caterpillar
And the storytelling Turtle

Take me to the Queen of Hearts
So I can play her crazy game
And so she can order her guards
To cut my head off
My friend :iconbloodyblade123: suggested that I should write smething inspired by Alice in Wonderland. And here it is.
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:iconannabelllee17:
AnnaBellLee17 Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2014  Student Writer
i sort of find the concept interesting.. i really need to read the book.

pretty good, Killerlord. I see you nailed the desire and the desperation to reach fictional lands.
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
Thanks. And I recomend that book. It's crazy but interesting.
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:iconannabelllee17:
AnnaBellLee17 Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2014  Student Writer
you're welcome. sounds perfect for me. :D
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
Good :D
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:iconwolfgirl2403:
wolfgirl2403 Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Nice~ I love Alice in Wonderland. It was a great book and movie. :) 
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
GhostOfTheEmptyGrave Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2014
Thanks. And I agree :nod:
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:iconwolfgirl2403:
wolfgirl2403 Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
My pleasure. :)
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Russianbear09 Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Well done. I think many have wished to go to Wonderland, and still do... I know I did.
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
GhostOfTheEmptyGrave Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2014
Thanks.
That would be a memorable adventure for sure.
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Russianbear09 Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
That it would.
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
GhostOfTheEmptyGrave Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2014
Yep.
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DreamingSerafina Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Awwww! <3 One of my very favourites now!!! :)
I love Alice soooo much and when I was younger, I always wanted to go to wonderland... A few white rabbits would tell you a story...!
Later on, I understood the real idea, about hallucinations, madness, insane people and stuff what was kinda creepy the first Moment when I recognized that my whole child fantasies of this were about beeing mad and insane...
Very good work, I really love your way of describing this beautiful crazy world... ;)
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
GhostOfTheEmptyGrave Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2014
I admit, when I read the story it felt creppier than I expected. The level of madness is really something there.
Thanks, I'm glad you liked it :)
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BrokenBrookieCookie Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I LOVE this! ouo Alice in Wonderland has always been one of my addictions. <3
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
GhostOfTheEmptyGrave Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2014
I'm glad. And that's not a bad addiction ;)
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BrokenBrookieCookie Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Hehe, true. ;)
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AsakoBunny Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
love, love, LOVE this! :D
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BloodyBlade123 Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thats awesome :3 glad you decided to write it XD
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
GhostOfTheEmptyGrave Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2014
Thanks. Took me a while to find the inspiration but I got it eventually :D
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:iconbloodyblade123:
BloodyBlade123 Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I think it came out really good :)
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
GhostOfTheEmptyGrave Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2014
Thanks :)
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:iconbloodyblade123:
BloodyBlade123 Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Your welcome :)
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:iconfleur-de-lis4444:
fleur-de-Lis4444 Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
i love it.
i love alice since my childhood.
thanks a lot for it.

maybe, when you have time, can you also do something with the cheshire cat and alice ?
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
GhostOfTheEmptyGrave Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2014
I'm glad you like it so much :D

Maybe someday. Who knows? :)
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:iconfleur-de-lis4444:
fleur-de-Lis4444 Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
you are welcome :D

i´m looking forward ^^
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
GhostOfTheEmptyGrave Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2014
Nice :)
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fleur-de-Lis4444 Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
:)
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:iconlmw-the-poet:
LMW-The-Poet Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
But... What about the Cheshire cat? He's the best!

But I like this poem. It's creepy. :meow: Makes me want to write about the Mad Hatter... (Favorite character! :D) I love Alice In Wonderland... Such an eerily lovely story.
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
GhostOfTheEmptyGrave Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2014
You're right, he deserved to be here. My bad... Sweating a little...  Maybe I'll touch that subject later :)

Thanks. I agree it's quite creepy but fun. You never know what's coming next :D
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:iconlmw-the-poet:
LMW-The-Poet Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Perhaps he could a poem all of his own? He is epic enough. Perhaps use him as a metaphor, his sneaky disappearing in mix with his attitude.

Maybe another rabbit hole to fall into in Wonderland... Hm. I wonder where that would lead to... (Giving myself for inspiration/ideas.)
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
GhostOfTheEmptyGrave Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2014
Maybe... Seems promising :D
These are all ideas to keep in mind.
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Aggie-tan Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
well then, thank you :iconbloodyblade123: for suggesting he write this :o
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:iconbloodyblade123:
BloodyBlade123 Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Haha your welcome ^-^'
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