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My love was pure
And honest
I only wanted
Her happiness
But my heart
Was broken
Because my love
Was rejected
Tossed aside
Like a piece of garbage
And now I'm unable
To love
Because the shreds
Of my shattered soul
Still belong
To her
Memories of broken hearts...
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:iconprincessiris250:
PrincessIris250 Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2014
This poem is my reaction when I found out my best friend asked out my crush today. Pikachu Crying Plz Llama Emoji-08 (Crying) [V1] Frozen - Elsa Crying Icon 
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
That really sucks :(
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:iconanikadstewart:
AnikaDStewart Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2014  Student Writer
Don't do that to yourself :/
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
GhostOfTheEmptyGrave Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2014
It's too late...
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:iconneyowargear:
NeyoWargear Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Happened three times now. Love is a bittersweet mistress...
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
Love is very cruel sometimes.
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:iconneyowargear:
NeyoWargear Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Indeed it can.
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:iconmysocksrock:
MySocksRock Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2014
Gosh, you just have this sexy deep darkness that I can't get enough of.  This piece shows it well.
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
Hehe, thanks a lot. Just doing what I do best :blush:
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:iconevilscarrlett:
EvilScarrlett Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
very sad but well written -
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
Thanks.
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EvilScarrlett Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
you're welcome!
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ChloeSheree Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2014  Hobbyist
I know that feeling all too well... :(
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ChloeSheree Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2014  Hobbyist
:) thanks
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
No problem :)
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:iconchloesheree:
ChloeSheree Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2014  Hobbyist
good to know someone cares every once in a while
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:icona-lovely-anxiety:
A-Lovely-Anxiety Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
i know this feeling better than i'd like to admit.
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
It's painful, isn't it? :(
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:icona-lovely-anxiety:
A-Lovely-Anxiety Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
yeah.

i'd like to think that the pain will go away someday.  maybe we can overcome it and learn to love someone else again.
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
It's good to think positive. Maybe someday this negativity will go away.
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:icona-lovely-anxiety:
A-Lovely-Anxiety Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
maybe.
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
Yeah...
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wolfgirl2403 Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Sad. :( I bet it's not a very fun thing to feel. 
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
Nope, not fun at all.
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:iconwolfgirl2403:
wolfgirl2403 Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I hope you are able to get over it soon. :)
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
So do I.
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LinaLestrangeArt Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2014  Student General Artist
"My love was pure
And honest"... 
Oh! It's sad! Waaaah! But it's a good poem!
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
It's supposed to be sad. 
And thanks :)
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KindCritic Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2014  Student Writer
Ah...this happened to a friend of mine once. And then I verbally beat the shit out of her ex-boyfriend, took back whatever shreds I could find, glued her back together and told her to suck it up and be wonderful again. Strangely it worked...
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
At least that story had a happy ending. And if you did that then you must be a great friend :)
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KindCritic Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2014  Student Writer
Happy ending, yes. Great friend? Debatable. Aggressively efficient, certainly. Great? Debatable.
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
Debatable is not the same as wrong :shrug:
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KindCritic Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2014  Student Writer
True!
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KingfisherSilentArmy Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:hug:
This is sad and I think a lot of people relate to it.

Btw do you know that is a daily deviation. :)
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
Love stories with sad endingd tend to be relatable :(

I know now :)
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:iconkingfishersilentarmy:
KingfisherSilentArmy Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah sad but true.

Haha yeah now you do. :D
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
Yeah :)
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Deathwatch116 Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2014
Why...why must such words appear after i have lost the woman i was to marry....these words are true....painful but true....
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
I'm so sorry to hear that... :huggle:
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Deathwatch116 Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2014
Thanks...it's quite hard to handle considering what all happened and that she was my first love...
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
I know it's hard. But it's not impossible.
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:icondeathwatch116:
Deathwatch116 Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2014
Yes it is true and I got many good people helping.
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
That's good :)
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:icondeathwatch116:
Deathwatch116 Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2014
Yes its tough to handle but I'm thankful to have them.
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
I'm glad to hear that :)
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:iconmyboyfriendisadragon:
reminds me of me and my best friend
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