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I might be insane
I feel like I am
Nothing makes sense anymore
Life means nothing
So look out
If you mess with my heart
I'll take you with me
To oblivion
To Hell...
A short one I wrote at college today.
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:iconwususuhou:
wususuhou Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
good!
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
Thanks.
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wolfgirl2403 Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Very emotional. 
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
GhostOfTheEmptyGrave Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2014
Thank you.
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TahiraKitty Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2014  Student Digital Artist
It's nice but I do not understand why you would take that person to hell cuz hell is a horrible place and if that person messes with your heart that person will go alone, not you so what I wanted to know was why would you take that person?
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GhostOfTheEmptyGrave Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2014
I meant I'd kill that person for making me feel miserable and I'd kill myself as well. That way we'd both go to Hell. I was thinking about a bully when I wrote this to be honest.
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:icontahirakitty:
TahiraKitty Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2014  Student Digital Artist
oh I'm so sorry. I didn't look at it this way. yeah! being bullied sucks!!!
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
GhostOfTheEmptyGrave Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2014
Yep, I know that from experience...
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:icontahirakitty:
TahiraKitty Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Please don't take it the wrong way.  The poem is really creative and good.
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MagicalJoey Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2014   Writer
It's almost two contrasting opinions - a) nothing making sense and b) protecting your heart.
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
GhostOfTheEmptyGrave Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2014
You're right. I didn't even see it that way.
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dorroaker Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2014  Student General Artist
I like, it good to let how  fill out
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
GhostOfTheEmptyGrave Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2014
Thanks. And yeah, it's nice.
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angeluchiha7 Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2014  Student Artist
 vary nice
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GhostOfTheEmptyGrave Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2014
Thanks.
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angeluchiha7 Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2014  Student Artist
you welcome ^-^
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:iconlmw-creations:
LMW-Creations Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Sometimes it just amazes me how you can express such thoughts so simply, and so quickly...
(This makes me want to listen to Unbreakable Heart, though... *plays song* :headphones:)
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
GhostOfTheEmptyGrave Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2014
Never underestimate the power of simplicity :)
(Rock hard!)
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Ghost9er2 Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2014  Hobbyist
My version of hell... is a place were you're an experiment... and nothing else... you're unloved, unwanted and are only meant to survive so you can suffer more. 

What you're describing sounds more like marriage . :rofl: bad joke, I know but, eh... if you've seen Ace Ventura Pet Detective, you'd get the joke... :lol: www.youtube.com/watch?v=aVH2hV… <--- Here's the clip. :rofl:
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
GhostOfTheEmptyGrave Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2014
Sounds like an interesting perspective.

One more reason to stay single :D
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:iconghost9er2:
Ghost9er2 Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2014  Hobbyist
only until you find your soul mate or someone you which to share your moments in life with. :nod: 
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
GhostOfTheEmptyGrave Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2014
I thougt I had found  that person more than once. I was wrong every time...
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:iconghost9er2:
Ghost9er2 Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2014  Hobbyist
well, you're not the only one... well. :blushes: I haven't pronounced my feelings towards someone I liked before because, I quite literally can't feel any emotion involving the heart unless that emotion is pain, and even then it's iffy. 
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
GhostOfTheEmptyGrave Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2014
I see. So much pain makes us numb to other feelings...
:hug:
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:iconghost9er2:
Ghost9er2 Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2014  Hobbyist
I never thought about it like that before... and I have suffered a great deal... :cry: my life is nothing more than a sad story...
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
GhostOfTheEmptyGrave Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2014
I'm sorry to hear that. But don't give up, OK? :)
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AnnaBellLee17 Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2014  Student Writer
Angel Emoticon i will spread my wings and save  the sound that brilliantly rings.
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
GhostOfTheEmptyGrave Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2014
Awww... :angel: 
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AnnaBellLee17 Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2014  Student Writer
:3
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bloodlustbunny Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
ok fare enough
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GhostOfTheEmptyGrave Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2014
If you say so.
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ChloeSheree Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2014  Hobbyist
Amazing, short yet... awesome :)
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
GhostOfTheEmptyGrave Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2014
Thanks :)
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RaphAndRoll Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Ah hell, I wonder when I can finally get dragged to it. *day dreaming*
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GhostOfTheEmptyGrave Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2014
I hope you go to heaven instead...
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KLove4Ever Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Short but powerful...:hug:
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GhostOfTheEmptyGrave Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2014
That's my style. Thanks.
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KLove4Ever Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
No problem, you're welcome.
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KLove4Ever Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:)
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Russianbear09 Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Are we going to hell? *packs bags* Okay, let's go.
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
GhostOfTheEmptyGrave Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2014
It will be like a vacation :D
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:iconrussianbear09:
Russianbear09 Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Yes! Vacation time! Though I hear it is quite hot there this time of the year.
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
GhostOfTheEmptyGrave Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2014
I think it's a pretty hot place. Better take light clothes.
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:iconrussianbear09:
Russianbear09 Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Bring some sunscreen.
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
GhostOfTheEmptyGrave Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2014
Sure. And some fresh drinks.
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:iconrussianbear09:
Russianbear09 Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Hope they have air conditioning.
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
GhostOfTheEmptyGrave Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2014
I heard they haven't...
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Guarded-Stallion Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2014  Student General Artist
I would follow you willingly there
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
GhostOfTheEmptyGrave Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2014
Maybe. But I'd like you to go to heaven instead. You belong there :angel: 
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