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I see light
I see darkness
I must fight
Aganist madness

It's clear to me
Now I can see
The rules are set
But I'm not going down yet
Something with rhyme. For a change :)
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Fameisdead Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Awesome. ^^!!!
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
Thanks.
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WeirdAndLovely Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
GOOD. :huggle:
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
Yeah :hug:
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StygianWolf Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Basically the rules in my school do not follow a code, something everyone uses. Nor is there one top dog. You are either hardcore eg masturbater, smoker, footballer, or fighter, or decent. Naturally the latter is oppressed. I plan to topple that.
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
Maybe someday the decent people will rule the world.
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StygianWolf Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Same
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StygianWolf Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
And that's when you realise we are really both messed up. ROFL ALERT
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
Yeah, strange moment :D
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tenshinya-desu Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Really good! Btw could you please tell me where can i post poems/stories too at the same categories as you do? I triet at the journal in my profile but i cant choose categories like  Literature / Poetry / Human Nature / Free Verse .... I am confused
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
Thanks.
In the jounals you can't use these categories. You have to submit the stuff as deviations to choose categories.
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maxeen1 Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2014
Love it
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
I'm glad :)
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maxeen1 Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2014
Keep up the good work
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
Haha, sure :)
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wolfgirl2403 Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Very good. :)
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
Thanks :)
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wolfgirl2403 Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
My pleasure~ :)
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slowlyfallingpart Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2014
I like this a lot :) a very well written piece, good job :)  
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
I'm glad you like it. And thanks.
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Ricardo-Orozco Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
your never afraid to say it good job : )
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
That's me :D And thanks.
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LadyOfFrost Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
This is good! I think the rhyme works quite well in this poem, actually. Gives it a good rhythm.
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
Thanks. I usually don't care much about that but it's nice to do a good job on that for once.
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EvilScarrlett Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
for conflict and hope! very good.
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
Thanks.
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EvilScarrlett Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
you're welcome :)
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Russianbear09 Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I like your rhymes. Good job.
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
Thank you :)
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Deadfish-SilentArmy Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Good sense of beat to this, you should consider this type more often as you are very good at it.
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
I guess I can make a nice flow when I'm inspired. Thanks, maybe I should do this more often.
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Deadfish-SilentArmy Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Yes, you should definitely consider it :)
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
Yeah :)
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BloodyBlade123 Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
this made me think of Alice in Wonderland for some reason! lol

OMG! that would be an awesome subject to write about! if you were to write about Wonderland it would be awesome! and i think its something you could DEFINITELY pull off! XD
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
Reallly? That's...interesting...

Wonderland...I'll keep that in mind :)
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BloodyBlade123 Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
haha yeah idk why but thats what it made me think of :P lol

i think it would be a cool thing to write about :3
(just an idea i thought i would throw out there anyways)
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
The ways of the mind are weird sometimes... :D

Yeah, you're right. I might use that someday. :P
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BloodyBlade123 Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yeah especially my mind lol XD

That would be cool :3
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
Mine has its moments too :D

Yeah :)
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BloodyBlade123 Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Lol ive been on an Alice in Wonderland kick lately haha my wip at the moment has an Alice in Wonderland theme to the background haha ^-^

:)
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
Looks like you're really into it...
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RaphAndRoll Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I can't remember if I commenter on this but if so I'll comment again! Great job, friend!
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
No you haven't. And thanks :)
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RaphAndRoll Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Good and you're welcome!
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AnnaBellLee17 Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2014  Student Writer
this really changes everything, you can fight it. 
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
Well, a little bit of hope doesn't hurt, right? :)
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