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King of the damned
I can't live like that
Leave me to die
Let this nightmare end

My friend, please
End my life
Just a poem, no need to worry, OK?
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:iconedelweissmarblebff:
EdelweissMarbleBFF Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This is totally me
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
I'm sorry you can relate :(
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:iconrobynmclaughlin:
RobynMcLaughlin Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Very powerful...i am overcome with the intensity of the emotion shown here! It's...my it's such a beautiful piece of work.
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
Thanks. It was meant to leave an impression, :)
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:iconrobynmclaughlin:
RobynMcLaughlin Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Trust me, it's done it's job...i wont be forgetting this in a hurry.
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
Good :D
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Diamonds-Dont-Shine Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I like it!
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
GhostOfTheEmptyGrave Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2014
I'm glad :)
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ReasonTheReasonable Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This is very powerful and very we'll written!!
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
Thanks a lot :)
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FlyingMintBunny2 Featured By Owner May 31, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
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Aww I so feel you! 
Well written! 
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
GhostOfTheEmptyGrave Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2014
:hug: Thanks a lot :)
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FlyingMintBunny2 Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
No problem! :meow: 
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FlyingMintBunny2 Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconhugplz:
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FlyingMintBunny2 Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:D
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wolfgirl2403 Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I really liked the beginning sentence. "King of the damned." I don't know why but that spoke to me. 
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. I used that because it was the first word that came to mind with the letter "K".
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wolfgirl2403 Featured By Owner May 5, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:)
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ChloeSheree Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2014  Hobbyist
So true, have definately felt like this before
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ChloeSheree Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2014  Hobbyist
:)
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xxatouchofrostxx Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:icontherethereplz:
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xxatouchofrostxx Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:tighthug:
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Blackofspades Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
great work!
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
Thanks.
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MagicalJoey Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2014   Writer
Dark but yet pleasing (how weird does that make me?)
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
It is :) (Only a bit, I guess :shrug: )
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angeluchiha7 Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2014  Student Artist
I like it and you like dark side of things a lot ,don't you :P
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
Darkness is my element...
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angeluchiha7 Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2014  Student Artist
cool
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PaleAuthor Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2014  Student Writer
Yeah yeah it's just a poem, I get it~
Your style reminds me a lot about my own. I also wrote one of these now. I'm using the sentence "Find A Way Out". I'm not going to post it in a long time but if you want I can send you it in a note so you can tell me what you think since you could probably help me improve it :)

And I also came to check to which category I should put my own: "free verse" got it!

Awesome poem as always ^^
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
If you want me to, sure, I can take a look and give my opinion.
And most of my stuff goes into 'free verse'. :)
Thanks.
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:iconlonewolfhowl87761994:
i like it  good poem
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
Thanks a lot :)
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:iconlonewolfhowl87761994:
np
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:iconraphandroll:
RaphAndRoll Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I love this soooo much! DO NOT ever stop writing!!!!! Please?
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
I'm glad you like ie. And I'll keep writing until the day I die, I swear!
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RaphAndRoll Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Awesome!
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LMW-Creations Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Glad 'it's just a poem', then - as long as it remains as simply a poem.

And I like this poem - every line is like it's own epic level.
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
Well, I'm familiar with suicidal thoughts... But I wouldn't ask anyone else to put an end to my life.

Thanks a lot. Wich was the one with the highest level?
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LMW-Creations Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I don't know, I can't choose... The first line gets your attention immediately in its epic phrasing, but the last two lines are like a perfect close...
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
Hehe, let's just say it's all good :)
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Leonardogirl4eve Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2014
"My friend,please
End my life"
I love that part. 
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
Thanks. I guess it has quite an impact.
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Leonardogirl4eve Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2014
Yup.
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