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It's broken
Shattered
Once more
It needs
Fixing
But I
I can't
Do it myself
I need
Someone else
To help me
A friend?
But I have none
A doctor?
But I don't trust them
Time?
Doesn't it
Heal everything?
Then maybe
It can fix
My broken soul
Written (in about a minute) for the Healing themed contest I mentioned in my last journal. If you want to enter: white-eagless.deviantart.com/j…
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angeluchiha7 Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2014  Student Artist
vary nice peom , var well done
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
Thanks  :)
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angeluchiha7 Featured By Owner May 20, 2014  Student Artist
 your welcome ^-^
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DayLightenedDark Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Great poem! I think time does heal some things. :)
Good luck for the contests that you're entering!~ :D
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GhostOfTheEmptyGrave Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2014
Thanks a lot.
And yes, it does. :nod:
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DayLightenedDark Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
No problem!
:D
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wolfgirl2403 Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Nice~ :D
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
Thanks. :)
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wolfgirl2403 Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
My pleasure~ :)
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AnnaBellLee17 Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2014  Student Writer

Time may be the only thing that humans can trust.  We have been known to not trust our own kind!

 

This deserves a favorite! Good luck and may the odds be in your favor!!! Hunger games icon FREE-2-USE 

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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
Time is reliable, at least.

And thanks a lot :)
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AnnaBellLee17 Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2014  Student Writer

no problem my friend

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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
Hehe :hug:
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MagicalJoey Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2014   Writer
Maybe it can :tighthug:
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
Maybe. Who knows? :)
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KLove4Ever Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Your poems are always so relatable... :huggle:
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
Is that a good or a bad thing?
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KLove4Ever Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Maybe some of both?
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
It's good because you feel less lonely and it's bad because it's a negative poem. Am I right?
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KLove4Ever Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Yes. 
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KLove4Ever Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:tighthug:
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PinkieTane Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Nice!
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
Thanks :)
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LMW-Creations Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I like this one. :meow:
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
Thanks. Simplebut great, that's ma style! :D
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