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Every moment
Of despair
Every feeling
In my heart
Another nail
In the coffin
Where my soul
Is being buried
Leaving behind
Nothing but
An empty shell
Just a quick poem.
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wolfgirl2403 Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
You can try to dig your soul up. :)
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
I'm gonna need a big shovel...
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wolfgirl2403 Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Well, at least you could dig it up. :)
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
Yeah... :)
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catbat0001 Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2014
Still hurting so badly? 
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
Hurts enough to be a problem :(
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catbat0001 Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2014
My heart gos out to you
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
Thanks :)
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AzureNebulae Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
One of your best <3333
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
Hardly. But thanks :) <3
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AzureNebulae Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
<3
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angeluchiha7 Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2014  Student Artist
nice one
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
Thanks :)
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angeluchiha7 Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2014  Student Artist
your welcome ^_^
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KLove4Ever Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:'( <3
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
Hey, smile, OK? :)
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KLove4Ever Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:hug:
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KLove4Ever Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
<3
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AnnaBellLee17 Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2014  Student Writer
:(
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
Sorry if it's sad :huggle:
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AnnaBellLee17 Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2014  Student Writer
it's okay.. sometimes it's better to show your emotions instead.
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
Yeah, I guess you're right :)
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AnnaBellLee17 Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2014  Student Writer
Huggle! 
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LMW-Creations Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
This has a beautiful flow and I love the imagery it brings... Especially the nail in the coffin, that seems to stand out to me most...
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
This time I tried to make it flow nicely. Looks like it came out OK. And the nail in the coffin...I've been trying to use that expression in a poem for a while, it sounds eerie but great :D
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LMW-Creations Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
The phrase alone makes me think of the undead trying to break free from their coffin - but it's just another nail driven in to keep it in it's place. Or instead, someone who is buried alive and the captor keeps driving in nails so his screams and bangs against the coffin are less likely to be heard. (Oh, eerie thoughts. :D Such epicness.)
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
These images are both creepy and epic. And I love them :D
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LMW-Creations Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:D
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MagicalJoey Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2014   Writer
:hug:
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
:hug: Thanks
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MrsKisses67 Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2014
:-)
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