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The flame is extinguished
My hopes and dreams are no more
Life has become a burden
And I don't even bother
Just a short one. It's more of a little vent than a poem but here you have it anyway.
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AnnaBellLee17 Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2014  Student Writer
5 seconds hug 
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angeluchiha7 Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2014  Student Artist
cool true poem for some of us
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
Yeah... :(
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:iconangeluchiha7:
angeluchiha7 Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2014  Student Artist
:)
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:iconloviiiisa:
loviiiisa Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2014
Very true, but life will not be a burden forever, 
amazing things will happen and the flame will burn brighter than ever. 
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
Someday, maybe. Hope still exists somewhere within...
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:iconkingfishersilentarmy:
KingfisherSilentArmy Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
This explains depression well, just remember that it's only part of you, it's not you!
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
Thanks. And I know that. But sometimes it gets hard to remember.
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KingfisherSilentArmy Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Welcome. Yeah I know about that, but it's good to remember this though, it's easy to feel like you could stay in that place forever, but that's not true it's just a stage in life.
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
I know. Life has many stages, some better than others.
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:iconkingfishersilentarmy:
KingfisherSilentArmy Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Yes exactly! :)
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wolfgirl2403 Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:( (Sad) hug 
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:iconmrhighsky:
MrHighsky Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I would say there is still some flame burning because when the flame is extinguished one can not live any more.
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
If there is, then it's barely burning.
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:iconmrhighsky:
MrHighsky Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
May be some day it will burn more brightly.
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
I hope so.
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nordinhoa1 Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2014
To end this song...
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:iconfelicia-neko:
Felicia-Neko Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
short but so true... that's depression alright.. thank you for sharing
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
Just wriying out of experience. But thanks :)
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Felicia-Neko Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
it really looks like that yeah :) that's why people can realte to it so much i suppose :)
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
Yep. I'm glad that people can understand what I mean.
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:iconfleur-de-lis4444:
fleur-de-Lis4444 Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
i feel it so often. i like how you put the feelings into words.
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
:hug: Thanks. That's what we poets do :)
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:iconfleur-de-lis4444:
fleur-de-Lis4444 Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
you are more than welcome :hug:
hehe..i know..and i´m happy about it.
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fleur-de-Lis4444 Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
:D
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:iconvivienne-mercier:
Vivienne-Mercier Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2014  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
The way I feel almost every day. :(
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
I'm sorry :(
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MatthewWilliams777 Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
its short but touching
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
Thanks. Length is not related to quality, right?
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StarsWritingDesk Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2014
Ahh Depression, something I am all too familiar with.
Short but well done my friend.
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
Same thing here...
Thanks.
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EvilScarrlett Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
very telling. good job.
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
Thanks, I'm glad you liked it :)
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EvilScarrlett Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
you're welcome!
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williamson13 Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Rings too true,
unfortunately. . .
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KLove4Ever Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:hug: 
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
Thank you... :huggle:
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:iconklove4ever:
KLove4Ever Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome, friend <3
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KLove4Ever Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:tighthug:
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KLove4Ever Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:)
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FainedFreckledFreak Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
you captured depression perfectly. nice job
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